Amit and Namita had been married for almost thirty years, it was a love marriage and they continue to be a loving couple. Their only son is in college studying for his engineering degree. Amit works with a bank as a regional manager while Namita is a teacher in a private school.
It was a second Saturday, a bank holiday, when Namita realised something was not okay with Amit. They had an invitation for dinner at Amit’s cousin’s home across the city. She got dressed up and checked on her son Aarav who was playing on his phone in his room but dressed and ready to go. She looked for Amit and found him in the drawing room sofa, fully dressed but sleeping. He had been sleeping throughout the day. Amit was in his early fifties, not old enough to fall asleep like that on the sofa, especially when he was well rested. She woke him up. Amit felt dizzy, went to the washroom to splash water on his face to freshen up. As they came to the parking, he tossed the car keys to his son. Aarav was delighted for the opportunity to drive. Namita, however, was sceptical as her son has never drove for such a long distance.
Three months have passed since then, Namita’s concern for the health of her husband has grown considerably. The reason was the appetite of Amit which has reduced to a great extent. Sunday lunches were meant to be mutton curry with rice but of late, Amit has started avoiding that and instead have a small portion of rice with dal and sabji. They used to go out for family dinner once a fortnight which became once a month and now, she can’t even remember the last outing. Amit has started avoiding his friends as well; he would come up with some excuse of being busy with work whenever they called to have a get-together. Namita decided, enough is enough and confronted her husband.
“You need to consult the doctor urgently. Have you seen yourself in the mirror lately? You are becoming a skeleton day by day. The shirts are hanging from your shoulder like a cloth hanger”
“I am fine, you worry too much.” Amit replied.
“Mom, why are you after Dad, he looks fine to me. Most of my friend’s fathers are obese.” Aarav commented.
“You stay out of it, Aarav. Do you even know that your dad’s trousers will fall if he doesn’t lock the belt on the last loop. The shirts hung on him like on a hanger. I am really worried.”
“Okay, I will consult with Doctor Burman after the half-yearly closing, till then I am extremely busy.” Amit tried to pacify his wife. These days, he doesn’t like any kind of confrontations or arguments, his heartbeats go up significantly making him unwell.
“I will fix up the appointment with the doctor.” Namita announced putting an end to the discussions.
In the beginning of October, just a couple of weeks before the grand festival of Durga Puja, Namita called up Doctor Burman’s clinic. They had been consulting Doctor Burman for a long time, starting with the care of Amit’s mother and then Aarav. He was their family physician and close friend, even though he was much older than them. The phone was picked up on the first ring and Doctor Burman answered himself. Namita was surprised as usually, Shonali, his receptionist used to take the calls to fix the appointments with the doctor.
“Hello.”
“Hello, Namita. Next Saturday evening, say around 8pm, you bring Amit to my chamber. I am sure he will get well soon. Ah, yes, I will send you the address of my new clinic.”
Namita was spellbound as she closed the call. She wondered how the doctor knew that she had called for her husband and not somebody else.
“I have taken the appointment with Doctor Burman for Saturday evening.” She declared as soon as Amit came home in the evening.
“What time? The coming Saturday is not a holiday; hope you know that.” Amit sounded exhausted.
“He will send the address of his new clinic and it is 8pm, you will be home much before that.” Namita replied and then added, “You know, even before I could tell him anything, he knew, you are the patient. How could he figure out, I don’t know.”
“It’s easy, since you had called, he assumed it must be for me. The doctors know that people in their fifties are likely to be suffering from some ailments.” Amit dismissed her confusion.
However, Namita continued to have a nagging question in her head.
The week progressed as usual, Amit remained busy with his banking work while Namita prepared for the half-yearly exams for her class. Aarav had returned to his hostel to prepare for the second semester exams. Doctor Burman was yet to send the address of his new clinic. Namita thought of calling him again but decided to wait for few more days.
On the evening of Friday, Namita picked up her phone to call the doctor and it immediately started ringing. It was a call from Doctor Burman.
“I was about to call you doctor about the address of your new clinic.” Namita blurted.
“I am sorry, I was preoccupied with some personal issues so couldn’t send you the address. Please check your message, I have sent you the details now.”
Before Namita could ask him anything, the phone connection was cut. She called again but a metallic voice said, “The number you are trying to connect is either switched off or out of network range.” She was confused, how is it possible for a mobile to become unreachable in a few seconds. She thought, maybe the phone battery died and the doctor has put it to charge. She will call later to find out what personal matter kept him busy all through the week. A woman’s inquisitiveness.
She checked her message box, surely there was a message from the doctor giving her the address of his new clinic. Namita looked confused reading the message, she spoke out, “Why the hell has he moved to such a godforsaken place?” Then she checked the location on the G-map, it was over an hour drive from their home. The area is sparsely populated with large tracts of cultivated lands. She was skeptical about going there after the sundown but Doctor Burman being a renowned physician and close to the family, she put aside her reservations.
“You know, Doctor Burman sent me the address of his new clinic. He has opened it in New Pratap Nagar.” Namita informed Amit.
“New Pratap Nagar? Isn’t that place on the outskirts of the city? Why move to such a godforsaken place when he had a popular, running clinic in the heart of the city?” Amit sounded astonished.
“Even I thought so… maybe he wants to move away from the hectic and demanding practice. He’s getting old too, may not have the same energy to check on hundreds of patients every day.”
“Maybe, we will ask him tomorrow when we meet him.”
“Yes, but we will have to start at least by 6:30 pm, the G-Map indicated a clear one-hour drive from here. We don’t know the area and may have to search the exact location of the clinic in darkness.”
“Hasn’t he given you the location of the clinic?”
“No, just the address.”
“Oh, anyways that’s not an issue, we have G-map to take us anywhere even if it is the first time visit.”
On Saturday, Amit came home in the afternoon and after lunch slept for two hours and that did wonder to his health and mind. He felt energetic.
Amit and Namita sat in the car and Amit pressed the start button. Nothing happened. No sound came from the engine. He waited for a minute and then tried again. Still no sound from the engine, it was dead. Amit had no idea but realized his battery may have died. But how, it worked fine in the morning when he went to office and later in the afternoon as well. There was no time to call the mechanic, they decided to take the cab and booked one for a four-hour slot because he wasn’t sure if they will get one for return journey. Namita, though a bit perturbed by the car breakdown, felt relieved that Amit won’t be driving such a long distance in his current health situation.
The young Uber driver, Dinesh, was smart and well acquainted with the city roads, he drove through the inner roads avoiding the traffic heavy main roads and they were soon on the outer ring road of the city cruising towards New Pratap Nagar. He turned towards his passengers and asked, “You want to go the industrial sector or the residential area of New Pratap Nagar.”
Neither Amit nor Namita had any idea that there are two different areas within New Pratap Nagar, they have never been anywhere near that place. Namita showed him the address.
“Oh, you want to go to the Tejaswi Mall, it is actually in the middle of the two sections. The industrial area ends and the residential area begins just ahead of it. But by the time we reach, most of the shops will be closed.” Dinesh informed them.
“We are meeting our doctor who has a clinic there and he has given us appointment at 8 pm.” Namita spoke and again wondered why he had called them at such late hour.
The Uber driver, Dinesh cruised through the expressway and reached New Pratap Nagar industrial sector and from there took the inside sector roads to reach his destination, Tejaswi Mall at five minutes to Eight. He dropped his passengers at the entrance and said, “I will be just outside the mall, no point of paying for the exorbitant parking charges inside.”
Amita and Namita entered the mall to find only a handful of shops still open, mostly restaurants but there were hardly any customers. They took the elevator to the 5th floor and exited to a dimly lit corridor. Practically all the units had their shutter downed. They walked through the corridor and found the clinic of Doctor Burman at the end of it. Nobody was there at the reception counter, so they pushed open the door to the inner chamber. It was again dimly lit, a blue light bulb that’s commonly used as night lamp could barely remove the darkness that enveloped the room. Once their vision adjusted to the low light, they saw Doctor Burman sitting behind a large desk. He seemed to have shrunk since they last met at his son’s wedding ceremony.
“Good, you have come just on time. Hope, you did not have any difficulty in finding the place.” Doctor Burman spoke without getting up from his chair. His voice sounded distant.
“Not at all, the Uber driver knew the place quite well. But tell us why did you shift your clinic to… this faraway location? What happened to your regular patients, are they coming here for consultations?” Namita asked.
“I am done with practicing; Amit is my last patient and then I will go away.” The doctor replied mysteriously in complete bewilderment of Namita and Amit.
“Go Away? Where?” Namita couldn’t help asking.
“Haven’t decided yet, but let me check Amit first. Please unbutton your shirt and lie down on the bed.”
The doctor got up to check Amit. His steps were slightly wobbly but he quickly balanced himself. The doctor was attired in long white coat that felt more like a robe. He put the stethoscope on the bare chest of Amit and he cringed at the coldness of the metal. Next, the doctor pressed his hand on the stomach of Amit and held the position for couple of minutes. Amit experienced excruciating pain at the pressing but slowly relaxed as the pain subsided slowly.
Doctor Burman returned to his desk and looked at Namita sitting across him. Namita also looked at him and froze. Doctor Burman’s eyes were just holes and burned red. The flesh from the face started melting to expose the bones. Namita thought she’s going to faint when she felt a hand resting on her shoulder. She screamed. No sound came from her throat. She turned around to find Amit standing behind her. She looked at Doctor Burman, everything looked normal. “Was I hallucinating?” she thought. She wanted to finish the meeting as quickly as possible and leave.
“So, doctor, what do you think is wrong with Amit? He has lost his appetite and loosing weight every day. I am really worried.” She asked.
“Yes, he was unwell, but now he’s on way to complete recovery. Don’t worry, in a week’s time you will get back your original Amit. i promise you.”
“Thank you doctor. What medicines are to be taken?”
“He doesn’t need any medication. You go home and enjoy the life.”
Namita took out four currency notes of 500 denomination and placed them in front of Doctor Burman. “Your fees, doctor.”
Doctor Burman laughed and said, “Please take it back, I don’t need the money.” Then he looked beyond them at the door and said in a harsh tone, “Please leave now. I have to go, people are waiting for me.”
Namita and Amit, without waiting any longer left the clinic and rushed to their waiting cab.
“If you don’t mind, can you tell me which doctor you consulted?” Dinesh asked as he drove out from the sidewalk.
“Doctor Burman, why are you asking?”
“Madam, I was waiting at the tea stall just outside the mall, chatting with the tea seller. I casually mentioned that you guys have come to meet your doctor inside the mall. He said that he knows all the tenants in that mall as his brother is the property agent in that area, and there is not a single clinic in that mall. He further said that only two floors, ground and first floors are operational. Rest all floors are still work in progress.”
“But we went to the fifth floor using the elevator and met the doctor at unit 501. Yes, the corridors were dimly lit and his cabin too but we thought it was because of electrical problem.” Namita spoke.
Dinesh just shrugged and continued driving through the city and soon reached his destination. He gave them his business card requesting them to call him directly instead of the app so that he can save the commission amount.
Amit and Namita walked towards the elevator after paying off the cab and agreeing to call him directly next time. Namita pressed the button to call the elevator. Suddenly, Amit excused himself and went to the parking bay where his car was parked. He got inside the car and pressed the start button. Vrooom, the engine came to life immediately. His brows narrowed in confusion.
“Where did you go?” Namita asked when he joined her at the elevator.
“Just went to the parking, the car engine came to life the moment I pressed the start button.” Amit sounded confused.
“There must have been some dirt accumulation in the fuel pipe which has cleared up now. Call the mechanic in the morning to check.” Namita tried to calm him.
Three months have passed since their consultation with Doctor Burman; Amit has recovered completely. Practically, overnight his appetite had improved, his energy level was high and in fact he was contemplating adopting a dog from the shelter. Aarav has shown full support for dog adoption but Namita is a bit apprehensive. He had taken his car to the service center once he felt better and the diagnosis after a thorough check-up has been baffling. There was nothing wrong with the engine or fuel system. The service engineer confirmed the battery is good for at least another ten thousand kilometers. No need to change now. They had to accept it as a freak case.
It was a Sunday evening, Namita, Amit and Aarav were watching the television when the door bell rang. Aarav opened the door to find a stranger, well-dressed gentleman.
“Is this the residence of Amit and Namita?” the stranger asked.
“Yes, and may I know your good name Sir?” Aarav replied.
“My name is Siddhant Burman, son of Doctor Burman. Are your parents at home?”
“Yes, they are home. Please come in.”
Aarav ushered him to the living room and made the introduction.
“We have met at your wedding few years ago but I guess you can’t recall.” Amit said as a conversation beginner. Then asked, “We were having tea, can I offer you some or you would prefer something else?”
“Tea is fine. I came to check on you.” Siddhant replied.
“Check on me? Why?”
“Let me explain. My father, Doctor Basant Burman, popularly known as just Doctor Burman passed away about three months ago due to a massive cardiac arrest. He was taken to the hospital a week before his death. He was responding well but on the 11th October evening he had his second attack and passed away.”
“You are saying that he passed away on 11th October? How is that possible? We consulted him on that very evening around 8 pm at his new clinic at New Pratap Nagar.” Namita almost screamed.
“Yes, he passed away on 11th October around 7:45pm and what new clinic and where’s this New Pratap Nagar? Never heard of this place. My father’s clinic is still at the same place where it started thirty years ago. In fact, I am practicing from there now having retired from the army.”
“He had messaged me the address of the new clinic.” Namita replied and then checked her mobile phone for the message. There were no messages from Doctor Burman’s contact number.”
“You are a physician too?” Amit asked.
“Yes, I am retired army doctor with a rank of Lt. Colonel. My specialization is oncology.”
“You said that you came to check on Amit but he never had the dreaded disease in the first place. Why would an oncologist check him?”
“Well, couple of weeks ago, going through the desk of my father, I came across his diary. He had the habit of writing down the medical history of his patients. I found out about Amit in one of the pages. The text was intriguing, more so, because, my father urged me to find out how Amit is doing.” He paused and took out leather-bound notebook…flipping through the pages, he stopped and extended the notebook towards Amit and Namita. They read the transcript written about fourteen weeks ago.
“I am expecting Amit to consult me any day now. His condition is deteriorating day by day and he’s oblivious to the fact that cancer is spreading in his body. In my current state, I can’t be of any help to him but may be in two weeks’ time if he comes to me, I will probably be able to cure his ailment.” At the bottom of the page addressed to his son, he had urged him, “Dear Siddu, once you read this diary, it will mean that I have left this mortal world. I urge you to go and meet Amit and Namita to see how they are doing. It will bring peace to my soul if they are happy and healthy.”
There was a complete silence in the room. None of them had any explanation about how Doctor Burman knew about Amit’s ailment and how he cured him of it.
After a while, Amit spoke, his voice filled with emotions, “I had suspected it to be cancer, when I started loosing weight drastically and couldn’t eat properly, as even the mildly tempered food would cause pain in my stomach. I thought of going to Doctor Burman but was afraid of the diagnosis. He truly, was a god to me. Now, I can understand why his touch felt so chilly but relieving that day. He took away the cancer cells from my body.”









































































